July 27, 2004
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A Summers Nights Musings
As I lay
The bed of lavender
Embraces me
My senses… reel
I look up high
The stars
So bright
…new
Somehow
I realize
My dreams
Are Mine
Life…to sway...
As I ask it to
I lay a hand
On my breast
Filling the void
That once was there
Night….
Absorbing
The fear
The complete..
….helplessness
I exhale my doubts
Along with
...My pain…
And inhale
Myself
Freedom…
I’ve found
©Jcs
Comments (8)
I like that a lot. It sounds very positive.
I just read back all your blogs I missed! I'm so glad the new job is going so well!! I'm sorry to read about your friend Bobby, and also about your life-changing, traumatic loss of your friend David. We feel so invincible when we're young, and do stupid things....I've got some icky memories of such consequences myself, different, but due to that insane invincible party stage. Tough....but it seems you're able to reflect back, and not take life for granted...
awesome post to a sweet person--ty for your comments on my sight i really enjoy yours--hugs--bb js
I like this, very much. It reminds me of one I wrote about my own finding of freedom and selfhood sitting outside one day.
so beautiful.. a heart so pure so loving.. thank you for sharing .. plz do not stop expressing this excellant work.. the more you write the most i feel new paths an doors you never saw before open
trin
It is a beautiful romantic an thought provoking poem. The picture ties in very well with it
Signed The Pirate Gnome
hun did you get the poem i sent you?
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